April 18, 2019  

B+ Creative Writing: describing an adventure (The deadline is Wednesday, April 24, 2019)

I think you remember Bear’s adventure. We will get inspired and write a story answering the following question:

You volunteer to help some tourists stuck/trapped in a jungle. Describe the different things you did and the challenges you faced before you reach them.

The deadline is Wednesday, April 24, 2019

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  1. Due to my great love and passion in having adventures I was the first one to decide to be on mission and to go on a trip in order to save some tourists trapped in a jungle.first I was in the helicopter, I had room in my backpack for one more item, grappling hook or slingshot . The latter is good for climbing up mountains while the former is for hunting and protection, I choosed the slingshot .I jumped from the helicopter my speed was super-high , i fell on one of the tall trees, so I could walk over it because of its intensity, But I stumbled and fell to the ground, oups , It was painful but it okay I had to finish. I was walking among the tall trees. I could not see the sunlight and then I found a river with a very strong current like a tsunami , I had no option , I had to cross, At a moment I felled that’s my end, the current was pushing me hard, and if I did not catch a branch of trees, I’ll be dead now.After all this suffering, I found that I did not go through the difficult stage yet. The chasm that I was passing through fell down. I could not climb it, It was steep redly .I spent the night trying to climb up again and again Without result, I eated the grub to keep me energized.yes , yes I did it . finnaly I was able to help tourists and we did not miss seeing the forest With its spectacular view.

  2. Due to my love for the jungle, I directly decide to help the tourists. After jumping from a plane i had to cross a wide lagoon but it was risky considering the fact that there were some frightening crocodiles, but luckly it was safe. After reaching the shore I had to find a daunting way to start my research. While walking I heard some snakes hissing loudly. All of a sudden I am standing across a crocodile, I had to act fast,I got my slingshot and shot at the crocodile and it fled. Subsenquetly, i had to cross a deep chasm, i tried so hard, the weather was really muggy and i start sweating, below the weather I did lot of efforts and succesefully I crossed the chasm. During the time I start feeling so hungry so I start to look up for some bugs to eat them because they’re rich of protein. Troughtout hours and hours I finally found the tourists they were looking sick, hungry and thursty but finally i was there for to secure them.

  3. Due to, my great love in having adventure i directly decide to help the tourists and to go on a trip in order to save them stucked in a jungle.Firstival , i was in helicoptor and my backpack was really full but actuall i had a room on it for one more item So after jumping i had to cross a lagoon but it was risky and dirty . In addition to this ,there were a lot of frightning crocodiles . Fortunally , i was saved and i started my research .Sudenly ,i am standing across a crocodile!Ihaveto do sth fast!so i have my slingshot ,i shot at it and it goes far .OMG! Ihave to cross a deep chasm !whatever i did all my efforts and i coss it .Some hours later , i feel so hungry ,i start looking up for my food and i found a bugs they are rich of protein .Finally ,the tourist is here with me .

  4. The adventurer named Bear Grylls is on a mission. In point of fact, He must save an archaeologist who dedicates her life to save the children in the jungle, but it’s not easy because it was a very dangerous jungle full of natural trapes like predators and reptiles. In addition to this, to start my mission I have two choices; I bushwhack or I get around until I cross a river and he chooses the second because it’s more until in this place. Then he was so hangry since he walks lots, with his chance, he found some termites and worms. I choose worms as it is packed of protein but not the termites because he must tikes a lots but he doesn’t have the time for that. Near to achieve his goal, the mischances comes now because he found a crocodile who blocks the road, we can say that the real adventure start, I must choose between getting around them or distract them with the arrow and pass quickly. If I choose the former they can smelt me and attack, therefore I choose the latter and I do it with success. Moreover, he faces a dangerous challenge, a chasm; he has two options to cross it: cross a tree’s log or a vine swing, he was not sure of his decision but he chooses the former because he must try and this a adventure, when he was crossing the log, unluckily, the log break and he falls down of the chasm. He tries hard to get up to the top of chasm because of the mud he didn’t give up and he redo the action with using the vine swing to swing from side to the other side. It was a hazardous mission but I succeeded. And after the dangerous obstacle, he founds near from the archaeologist I heard some screams and follow them. Finally I join the archaeologist who was very tired, I give him some water and we return to the helicopter.

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